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As the walls we build
Around ourselves
Fall away around us

We find ourselves lost
Trying to build the barrier again
To protect ourselves from the truth

Of the outside world.

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:iconyokie44:
Why have I never noticed this shot before? So Steph and I are talking about technique and composition, and looking through your work and just kind of critiquing and discussing it for the sake of learning. We came across this and I was actually kind of shocked because I've never noticed this one before. The angle is great. The wall isn't dead center. My eye keeps moving throughout the image from the water to the wall, and the trees.

C&C: Crop in tighter to the wall? Maybe? No. I pretty much like this how it is. I wish there were a higher resolution copy uploaded so it was bigger.. I really really like it.The exposure is good, the colors are good.... Like I'm sitting here and wondering why i never noticed it before.

Again,very very very nice composition. :]
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Very awesome

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One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'
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Thank you

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Photography To Me, Is A Chance To Hold On To What We Never Wish To Let Go. [link]

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March 20, 2008
4.9 MB
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D70
10/1600 second
F/3.8
25 mm
Aug 7, 2007, 1:58:19 PM

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